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[Belannaer]

Je pense que "up to" peut aussi traduire le devoir au sens responsabilité, mais pour éviter toute confusion pourquoi ne pas traduire par "It falled to him to slow the enemy down" ? Pour retranscrire le côté "cette tâche lui incombe".

Belannaer

[Etienne, Duc d'Aquitanie]

Putain, j'allais me barrer, et je viens de me rappeler le synopsis qui n'est pas corrigé...
Et merde...
Bon, c'est parti, vite fait, un quart d'heure top chrono.

Synopsis: Eighth Circle.

A Sergeant Terminator remembers, encouraged by an unknown voice, the deployment of his squad from the hall of teleportation of the Fulgurance, destroyer of his Chapter, to the decrepit corridors of an abandonned ship, the discovery of the warship’s secrets, the objectives to be fulfilled despite the loss of the link with the destroyer, the disembarking of an heretic force.

Soon thrown in a race against time with heretics, the devout Space Marine tries to fill each goal given to him by his Brother-Captain. Hard fights erupts between his squad and the traitors they are facing. Will they manage to connect the enslaved piloting system ?

He will discover over this dialogue the true history of the spaceship, just as he remembers his own history. That voice which seemed so close and so distant know him very well, nevertheless.

Where are they? What are they doing here ? What are the motivations of the heretics they are battleing against ? What is the true fate of the Fulgurance ? What is the real nature of this ship that seems to arise from ancient times ? Why can't he move or see anything ?

His squad destroyed by heretics, his best friends dead, he learns without really understanding it what really happened, the horrible destiny that awaits him now.

However, he doesn’t achieve to emerge from the nightmare that surrounds him. He’s now alone with this voice that guides him.

Bon, voilà, j'espère que ça va, je suis désolé de pas avoir plus de temps à consacrer à ce texte qui en mériterait plus, mais bon, dur dur de concilier la vie de Forum et les autres vies...
Titi

[Once upon a time]

C'est parfait, c'est mieux que ce que j'ai fais avec tes indications... grrrrr...

Merki beaucoup et bonne fin de week end (que tu ne liras pas avant ton retour)

Merci de nouveau à Bel' je comprend le truc de langage autour de la dernière phrase (marrant je la trouve à la fois évidente en français et carrément reloud en anglais... je crois qu'elle va tout bonnement disparaître, la fin c'est le dernier truc à rater si c'est pas compréhensible)

Once, pas grave evilsunz, même un bonjour m'aurait fait péter les plombs vendredi...